Quick mock up of style of music

This is a quick mock up of what i think the style of music should be , i thought it should be quite dark but a orchestral string aswell for suspense.Here's a quick mock up of an example that im thinking for the style of music.http://www.upurload.com/file.php?name=56a3ed6a95a3f7e5593e130e7ed868f4.mp3
You dont have to download it , just play it .
If you have any ideas on the music reply to what feel it should have.Another question i have is should we have ambience of bombs and bullets in the background?To make it more atmospheric?

Good!
Will be good for the action scenes.
We need now another one for suspense scenes.

lol , that was only a mock up , but ok
if anyone has got fl studio 9 here , or i think 8 then ill pass the flp file to see if they can improve it , im working on suspense now
P.s :

-ill make a load of songs for variety like super smash bros, unlockable songs.

OK. But I don't have FL studio. Maybe Codyyo2 has it.

I think he said he did.

ok , well i started the suspense and this is what it sounds like.
http://www.upurload.com/file.php?name=4ae20ea541cd5712eb4f4c9b88479076.mp3

heres the action music file link:
http://www.mediafire.com/?dtn5ejqxtod

the latest suspense one
http://www.mediafire.com/?eezkodnmwyg

Good, I like it.

Is it possible to get a library or something for the piano in the action one because it sounds.. A lil' to piano-ish IMHO

But kick-ass job mate.

yes ill try that

any idea where to find a better libary of sounds ( ive only got electronic ones)

You have FL right? Just use the drums and Fruity slayer, also PoiZone and ToxiBiohazard have some presets that aren't electric.

yerr i know that but i need a better piano sound , and i used fl keys in action.

Ah, I see what you mean. Maybe play around with pitch and the other dials to change it up a bit?

ok , ill look at the fl key settings